Wow, what a great story Oliver and Cameron. I can see you have spent a lot of time and effort on writing this(and playing Minecraft!!), and have checked your spelling and punctuation really well and that it all makes sense. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the stories you have written about Allegro, I hope there are many more!
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Wow, what a great story Oliver and Cameron. I can see you have spent a lot of time and effort on writing this(and playing Minecraft!!), and have checked your spelling and punctuation really well and that it all makes sense. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the stories you have written about Allegro, I hope there are many more!
That was very good. You explained the game really well and I think I would be able to play now.
Gran
This story convinced me to integrate Minecraft into my Year 5 class in 2015. Well done boys.
:)
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